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校园类英语作文讨论校园体育活动的开展，按照四级的格式与要求，写出120个词。
高中生写的文章居然被引用到四六级，不害臊，我给上面文章的评价是，第一个分论点与观点矛盾，词汇量小，句式变化不多。下面是一篇谈旅游业发展与传统文化冲突的文章，自己比较下吧。
The booming tourist trade has brought about mass exchange of population between different nations. At first glance, this bridges the understanding and communication between different cultures. In my opinion, however, this fast-growing industry has produced tension between people from different cultural background.
The first barrier for curious tourists from all over the world is the problem of language. The most attractive destinations of tourism are, ironically, less developed areas where the world language --- English, has not been prevalent. Therefore, the direct contact between tourists and local residents has been cut down. The tour guide, normally interpreter too, becomes the only link of communication. But unfortunately, as indicated in any guide-training handbook, the responsibility of a tour guide is to arouse the tourists’ interest and passion rather than present a lecture on cultural difference. Thus, tourists, beyond their expectations, cannot fully understand the cultures which appears to be exotic.
Another obstacle is from the local government. As I argue before, in most of case, the ‘local’ refers to the less developed regions. In order to attract foreign investment and maintain the local tourism industry, the officials, deliberately or not, only hope to show outsiders the positive side of the area, hence, the part of local living. As a result, conducted tours are carefully censored. The tourists, or ‘prisoners’ to some extent, are allowed to see only what the organizers want them to see and no more. A window-shop schedule gives no opportunity to wander off on one’s own. In this way, even for a knowledgeable traveler with practical experience can only ‘see’ the superficial of the local culture. If so, an instant misunderstanding will be falsely shaped.
All things considered, the international tourism contributes absolutely nothing to increasing understanding. Instead, in its way as it is today, a hideous prejudice and misinterpretation will be established.
利与弊：
……(用一个从句引出的话题) gradually becomes a pressing/hot-button/controversial/heated issue/opinion . In my point of view , trere are some advantages/strenthens/merits and disadvantages/weakens/shortcommings . In this essay , I want to compare them in several aspects and suggest some actions to take to solve its bad parts .
接下来讲这个问题的几点缺点。（两三个即可）
然后再讲解决方法，要注意有针对性。
最后再结尾，提出一些设想和对未来的展望就可以了。
其实什么模板套句都是没有什么用的，关键是怎么样让作文更有表现力，这是要长期训练的结果。
我可以举个很简单的例子：
非洲国家有很多人正在遭受饥饿、痛苦和贫穷。
高中生可以这样写：
Many people in African coutries are very poor , pain and hungry .（词汇贫乏句式简单，pain用词不恰当）
一般的大学生可以这样写：
Africans are suffering from stavation , misery and poor life .（虽然有一定的词汇，但是没有表现力，很乏味，相信改卷老师看了太多这样的句子了，已经是睡眼惺忪了。）
英语专业的学生就不一样拉，他们寻求表现力：
Stavation , misery and poverty(贫穷) are embracing tens of thousands of residents(居民) living in African coutries .（不简单，不用人做主语，形象生动，句式有些复杂，用现在分词做定语，词汇量大，表现力强。）
所以写作的时候要绞尽脑汁（rack your brain）来想出一些办法增强表现力，但是这是一个长期的过程，不可能一蹴而就的！
帮我翻译这篇文章 英文!
天阿，这么长啊 ，我可没这毅力都打下来，用金山快译帮你翻译翻译好了，复制在下面了：
Swim the sport is one of the athletics items that both sexes and all ages like.The ancient times swim, researching according to the existing historical data, domestic and international more consistent viewpoint is produce in live in the river, river, lake, sea on take of ancient person.They for the sake of existence, want by all means to catch waterfowl and fishs to make the food in the water, pass the observation and copy the animals, such as fish and frog...etc. to swim the dynamic action in the water, mastered the swimming gradually.
The our country history is long, the water is broad.Jot down the medium swimming, begin from 5,000 year agos.But the swimming be an individual to teach the business that the item can develop to still be close to several decades.
Modern swimming the sport originates England.60's in 17 centuries, British not a few swimming activities of regions open the exhibition to get very active.
In 1828, England repaired the first indoor swimming pool in Liverpudlian George's wharf, this kind of swimming pool to 30's in 19 centuries, one after another appeared in each big city city in England.
In 1837, established the first swimming organization in London in England, held the earliest swimming in England game at the same time.
In January 1869, unite the meeting( now the British amateur swimming association precursor) to combine to be a specialized sport item formality to the swimming in the swimming club that London established big city City solid settle down. Combine to stream into each English colony immediately, spread the whole world subsequently. Along with the development that swimming exercise, the swimming was is divided into the swimming of 衫 and tournaments swim the two major type.The practical swimming is divided into the sidestroke, 潜泳 , anti- frog 泳 , tramples the water, gives first-aid again, armed 泅渡 ;The tournament swimming is divided into the frog 泳 , crawl, backstroke, 蝶泳 .
The tournament swimming, was included in the formal item of Olympic game from the first batch Olympic game(1896).Develop till now, various championships, the international large game pushes the development of contest the swimming continuously, making its technique action more perfect, creating the one and other excellent result.
Nowadays world, the swimming of the Euro-American athletics big country is still to lead the level.The our country 泳 坛 soldier WU2 ZHUAN4 YU4 the as early as cloth added the 勒斯 in 1953 especially the first batch international youth comity sports games up, obtained the champion of the 100 m backstroke.But Chinese woman will a series of and excellent result in the creation of the beginning of 90's, just real make the swimming in China cause the attention of the international 泳坛 .
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